Forrest Daniels II

(Trying something new. Let me know if  it works. Thanks!)

Someone speaking. A touch. A face. Words, but not words.

“I don’t understand.”

Woman, wearing white. Smiling. Talking. Name, a word I understand.


“My name?”

My name…..nothing.

“I don’t know.”

“Forrest? Ok.”

Forest. My name. More words. Anger.

“What’s this?”

Red water?

“Juice? I don’t know that.”

Sip. Sweet. Wet.

Quiet. Time gone. Want to go. Stand. Move.

“Sit? I don’t want to sit.”

Anger. Mad. “Don’t touch me.”


“I am being nice.”


“My name?”  Tired. Sit. “I don’t remember.”


New face. Eyes. Blue. Remember. Happy. Love.


Smile. “Yes, it’s Margaret, Forrest, your wife.”



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2 thoughts on “Forrest Daniels II

  1. Mom says:

    Sounds good to me.

  2. Kristiina says:

    Intriguing. I kind of get it but am a bit confused by the dialogue – which words are Forrest’s and which are the nurse or Margaret.

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